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| #{{User|Vommack}} Per BLOF(For the time being, at least). | | #{{User|Vommack}} Per BLOF(For the time being, at least). |
| #{{User|Marshal Dan Troop}} The wording seems off in certain areas such as '''But with many strange occurrences, and even the disappearance of a group member, caused all future investigations of the Pyramid to be cancelled, and a newspaper article was published regarding the recent events.''' that sentence feels awkward to read and I think it requires another word at some point, also there are point of view problems such as ''' It comically reads; "STEAKS! EAT AS MUCH AS YOU CAN!!" The game ends with gold bars forming the words THE END.''' who is to say that, that is comical I mean I don't find it funny. There are also other problems with the article including inaccuracies.
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