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{{FANOMFAIL
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|nominated=5:30, 20 June 2011
|nominated=July 8, 2011 16:28 (GMT)
|lastedit=00:49, 30 September 2012 (GMT)
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==== Support ====
==== Support ====
#{{User|Supremo78}} After tons of work after nominating this, all content, grammar, and pictures are great, which is why this needs to be a featured article.
#{{User|Supremo78}} I think this article is very well-written. Nothing needs to be expanded. It has very well information on all sections of this article. I think this deserves to be featured.
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==== Oppose ====
==== Oppose ====
#{{User|New Super Mario}} It seems to be lacking information
#{{User|Goomba's Shoe15}} there is a rewrite and expansion template on it things with rewrite templates can not be featured also it's lacking info on the Mario Kart GP series even though it's a character item according to the template. Thwomps also appear in Yoshi's Cookie and yet that appearance is not mentioned. Your also missing info on Super Princess Peach.
#{{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} There are many one liners. For example, Mario Pinball Land could say what they done, the Mario Kart series could say where they appeared and sometimes what they do (except Mario Kart Wii, for some odd reason), Mario & Luigi could use images, and Mario vs. Donkey Kong could use more pictures and more info. Other than these mistakes the article is decent.
#{{User|Goomba's Shoe15}} Per above
#{{user|mario Bros.!}} Tense
#{{User|Technickal}} Per New Super Mario, add pictures and more information for the ''Mario Party'' and ''Mario & Luigi'' games and I'll change my vote
#{{User|Commander Code-8}} The Mario Pinball Land section doesn't give any info about Thwomps, it just tells readers how to beat the boss. This isn't a cheat website, it's a wiki. Big difference. The image under the Mario Party 3 section is also pretty bad quality
#{{User|Weirdrandomchick}} It was great but I felt like it was talking about Thwomp Sub-Species more then the actual thing! They do have there own pages you know! The Mario Pinball Land section was also going off-topic!
#{{User|Fawfulfury65}} The Mario Party 9 section needs updated, and the Mario Pinball Land section is a little off-topic.
#{{User|GreenDisaster}} Per all.
#{{User|Vommack}} Per all.
#{{User|Koopa K}} Per all, too many short sections.


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::SPP added. {{User|Supremo78}}
::SPP added. {{User|Supremo78}}
:::Once again where does it appear and can you defeat it neither of those things are in the article and they should be {{User|Goomba's Shoe15}}
:::Once again where does it appear and can you defeat it neither of those things are in the article and they should be {{User|Goomba's Shoe15}}
Ok I think I pretty much got everything... {{User|Supremo78}}
@'''New Super Mario''' Where is it lacking information? I added a lot more information last night. {{User|Supremo78}}
:And yet it's still missing info {{User|Goomba's Shoe15}}
::Added MKAGP2, no more missing info. {{User|Supremo78}}
:::Yes there is you've given almost no detail on what thwomp's do as an item and theres not detail on Thwomps appearances in the Super Mario Kun Manga as well as no real info on there appearances in the Nintendo adventure books and no info on Yoshi's Cookie either everything must be there and in detail before i remove my oppose vote {{User|Goomba's Shoe15}}
Can you tell me where you found out they appear in Mario Kun? And yes, there is a Nintendo Adventure Books section, and I just added Yoshi's Cookie. {{User|Supremo78}}
:They appear in at least one Mario Kun Manga since it's based off of Mario and Luigi Partners and time a game which Thwomps played a sizable role in. also your still lacking info in the Nintendo Adventure Books section cause it doesnt tell me what they did just that they appeared. Also the Mario Golf Section needs some work and so does the Mario Kart GP2 section {{User|Goomba's Shoe15}}
::Almost done. Now just on Kun and more on MKAGP2. {{User|Supremo78}}
:::Super Mario Adventures comic is also missing {{User|Goomba's Shoe15}}
Did SMA. {{User|Supremo78}}
:Did I get everything you wanted? {{User|Supremo78}}
::No you didnt detail what Thwomps do as an item {{User|Goomba's Shoe15}}
:::Is that all I need to do? {{User|Supremo78}}
::::I think so but i'm not good with tense or images so i don't know but content wise i think your good {{User|Goomba's Shoe15}}
It's getting really hard though cause I can't find any information of what the Thwomp does... {{User|Supremo78}}
:FINALLY FINISHED!! {{User|Supremo78}}
::You're kidding, riiiiight? Finished? There are more one-liners then I can count in here. Just because the article says they appear in Yoshi's Cookie doesn't mean they actually do, I have yet to see anything suggesting they actually appear in that game. You have lists for notable members and subspecies listed TWICE(Once incomplete), and I thought that Whomps were related to Thwomps, not a subspecies. I regret to inform you that this article is far from what you suggest. {{User|Vommack}}
:::Regarding Whomps as sub-species I think related essentially means sub-species on this wiki. {{User|Raven Effect}}
This has been around for nearly a year and isn't going anywhere, can we just mark this as stagnant?{{User|Vommack}}
:^I support this. {{User|Yoshi K}}

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