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#{{User|Icemario11}} Well-written, detailed descriptions of each level for the world with no (as far as I can tell) spelling or grammar mistakes present, and isn't at all a stub. Few red links, has wide range of good quality images and no improvement tags. I fail to see why this shouldn't become a featured article.
#{{User|Icemario11}} Well-written, detailed descriptions of each level for the world with no (as far as I can tell) spelling or grammar mistakes present, and isn't at all a stub. No red links, has wide range of good quality images and no improvement tags. I fail to see why this shouldn't become a featured article.
#{{User|Ztar Power}}
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#{{User|WeHatePoisonMushrooms66}}
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#{{User|LeftyGreenMario}}
#{{User|Yoshi876}}
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I read the first parts of the article and the grammar isn't too bad. However, you tend to make quite lengthy sentences. I also trimmed some space on the article. {{User|Baby Luigi}}
I read the first parts of the article and the grammar isn't too bad. However, you tend to make quite lengthy sentences. I also trimmed some space on the article. {{User|Baby Luigi}}
:@Mr.L1998: "Minor" is subjective, and this isn't talking about the articles content itself, but rather about the quality of the article. You can never have too much images in a gallery too: they help paint a picture of what the subject is about, and we're better as visual learners. The only valid oppose is the opening is too short....that could be fixed {{User|Baby Luigi}}
@Mr.L1998: "Minor" is subjective, and this isn't talking about the articles content itself, but rather about the quality of the article. You can never have too much images in a gallery too: they help paint a picture of what the subject is about, and we're better as visual learners. The only valid oppose is the opening is too short....that could be fixed {{User|Baby Luigi}}
Good. Once you expand the opening paragraph, it will be even better. I will check the article for further errors and some word cutting. {{User|LeftyGreenMario}}
::It's a bit wordy on some parts, and the sentences can be stringy and repetitive. That's all the issues I see, though, considering that I've read the whole article. Despite this, you did a great job in this article and it's good we have people devoting their time to create detailed articles like this. {{User|LeftyGreenMario}}

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