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|nominated=11:48, | |nominated=11:48, Febuary 19th, 2011 (GMT) | ||
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#{{User|Reddragon19k}} | #{{User|Reddragon19k}} | ||
#{{User|Mesuxelf}} | #{{User|Mesuxelf}} | ||
#{{User|DKC2 King Liam}} | |||
#{{User|MushroomMadness1221}} | |||
#{{User|Ilove marioandtoad}} | #{{User|Ilove marioandtoad}} | ||
#{{User|Luigi time!}} | #{{User|Luigi time!}} | ||
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#{{User|Bop1996}} | #{{User|Bop1996}} | ||
#{{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} | #{{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} | ||
#{{User|Rosalina'sSoulMate}} | |||
#{{User|Tails777}} | #{{User|Tails777}} | ||
#{{User|DKPetey99}} | #{{User|DKPetey99}} | ||
#{{User|Superfiremario}} | #{{User|Superfiremario}} | ||
#{{User|SWFlash}} | #{{User|SWFlash}} | ||
==== Oppose ==== | ==== Oppose ==== | ||
#{{User|Fawfulfury65}} Per my comments and BabyLuigiOnFire. | #{{User|Fawfulfury65}} Per my comments and BabyLuigiOnFire. | ||
#{{User|MeritC}} This has potential for being featured, but for now, I sadly have to oppose per reasons above. Let's see if we all can follow through on BLOF's suggestions before another "featured article" attempt takes place in the future. | #{{User|MeritC}} This has potential for being featured, but for now, I sadly have to oppose per reasons above. Let's see if we all can follow through on BLOF's suggestions before another "featured article" attempt takes place in the future. | ||
#{{User|Smileymiley5001}}I bought the game yesterday,and there is a lot of stuff in it that I cant find in the article or articles relating to the subject. | #{{User|Smileymiley5001}}I bought the game yesterday,and there is a lot of stuff in it that I cant find in the article or articles relating to the subject. | ||
#{{User|MrConcreteDonkey}} - Per MeritC and Fawfulfury. | #{{User|MrConcreteDonkey}} - Per BLOF, MeritC and Fawfulfury. | ||
#{{User|Pokémon Trainer Mario}} Per all. | #{{User|Pokémon Trainer Mario}} Per all. | ||
#{{User|HenryClaylogan}} Per all. | #{{User|HenryClaylogan}} Per all. | ||
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#{{User|IGGY7735}} Per all. Looks Better. | #{{User|IGGY7735}} Per all. Looks Better. | ||
#{{User|LeftyGreenMario}} The article is good, but it still needs some sprucing up. The information it gives out gets very redundant and repetitive at some points (like controls and how it keeps saying "this character then makes a shot"). These two issues bother me very much; it makes the article very boring to read. I just edited the controls section (which was a sea of text). I hope this won't get reverted because I'm a visual learner myself, and I think seeing all these words instead of simple icons would be more difficult to read, understand, and maintain interest. | #{{User|LeftyGreenMario}} The article is good, but it still needs some sprucing up. The information it gives out gets very redundant and repetitive at some points (like controls and how it keeps saying "this character then makes a shot"). These two issues bother me very much; it makes the article very boring to read. I just edited the controls section (which was a sea of text). I hope this won't get reverted because I'm a visual learner myself, and I think seeing all these words instead of simple icons would be more difficult to read, understand, and maintain interest. | ||
==== Removal of Opposes ==== | ==== Removal of Opposes ==== | ||
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::I've rewritted that part, seems to be good now. {{User|SWFlash}} | ::I've rewritted that part, seems to be good now. {{User|SWFlash}} | ||
:::Do lines like ''"Play 40 matches"'' refer to the the reader directly? It does not contain the word you or anything. It's just ''"Play 40 matches"''. I think it's not a real problem if the text says ''"The player should"'' or simply ''"Play"''. Other featured articles like [[Mario Kart Wii]] also use lines like ''"Win 100cc Leaf Cup or play 1,050 races"'' and nobody made a problem of that. {{User|Arend}} | :::Do lines like ''"Play 40 matches"'' refer to the the reader directly? It does not contain the word you or anything. It's just ''"Play 40 matches"''. I think it's not a real problem if the text says ''"The player should"'' or simply ''"Play"''. Other featured articles like [[Mario Kart Wii]] also use lines like ''"Win 100cc Leaf Cup or play 1,050 races"'' and nobody made a problem of that. {{User|Arend}} | ||
::::''Play X'' is actually does, because it motivates the reader to do the task, much like all other "you should do X" things. About MKWii: someone should rewrite it. {{User | ::::''Play X'' is actually does, because it motivates the reader the thing to do the task, much like all other "you should do X" things. About MKWii: someone should rewrite it. {{User:SWFlash/Sig}} | ||
