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|nominated=5 August 2011, 11:07 GMT | |nominated=5 August 2011, 11:07 GMT | ||
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==== Support ==== | ==== Support ==== | ||
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#{{User|LeftyGreenMario}} | #{{User|LeftyGreenMario}} | ||
#{{User|Conanshinichi}} | #{{User|Conanshinichi}} | ||
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#{{User|Reversinator}} Half of the sections are missing images, and at the same time, all the images that are there are cluttering the article.<nowiki> | #{{User|Reversinator}} Half of the sections are missing images, and at the same time, all the images that are there are cluttering the article.<nowiki> <br clear=all></nowiki> should be used in there. Also, the article is in the past tense when it should be in the present tense. Also, a few of the sentances are too fancy, such as ''"Trouble once again brewed in Donkey Kong 64. King K. Rool, hungry for revenge, attempts to attack Donkey Kong Island."'' | ||
#{{User|Yoshiwaker}} - Per Reversinator, and a lot of the sections could use more info. | #{{User|Yoshiwaker}} - Per Reversinator, and a lot of the sections could use more info. | ||
#{{User|Superfiremario}} Per all. | #{{User|Superfiremario}} Per all. | ||
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#{{User|MrConcreteDonkey}}: Per all. | #{{User|MrConcreteDonkey}}: Per all. | ||
#{{User|GEX}} per all | #{{User|GEX}} per all | ||
==== Removal of Support/Opposes ==== | ==== Removal of Support/Opposes ==== | ||
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#{{User|LeftyGreenMario}} Look at my comment. If an article is written like a story (hence, fancy sentences), many people consider it to be biased, too flowery, and poorly written. Just because it isn't in the rules doesn't mean it is good or bad. The rules aren't everything; they are just basic guidelines. Anyway, I don't see any problem with this article, since I fixed most of the stuff. | #{{User|LeftyGreenMario}} Look at my comment. If an article is written like a story (hence, fancy sentences), many people consider it to be biased, too flowery, and poorly written. Just because it isn't in the rules doesn't mean it is good or bad. The rules aren't everything; they are just basic guidelines. Anyway, I don't see any problem with this article, since I fixed most of the stuff. | ||
#{{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} Per LGM | #{{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} Per LGM | ||
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Fawfulfury65: I added the Powers and Abilities section. It may not be all, but I hope I got most of it down. And can you please tell me what parts of the section needs a bit of work, like does it need expansion? Is the story written too flowery? Is the summary too brief? I need to know what are the problems so I can fix them. {{User|LeftyGreenMario}} | Fawfulfury65: I added the Powers and Abilities section. It may not be all, but I hope I got most of it down. And can you please tell me what parts of the section needs a bit of work, like does it need expansion? Is the story written too flowery? Is the summary too brief? I need to know what are the problems so I can fix them. {{User|LeftyGreenMario}} | ||
PrincessVandal: NO, THIS SHALL NOT BE A FEATURED ARTICLE!! | |||
