Editing MarioWiki:Featured articles/N1/Bullet Bill

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==== Support ====
#{{User|OhoJeeOnFire}} This article is in excellent shape and it is in Wikipedia format, so it should be featured.
#{{User|Bubbasour11}} It has links to most of the sub-species.
#{{User|CBFan5}} Overall, this article is pretty good.  It has few contractions, and its format is great.  Therefore, it should be featured.

==== Oppose ====
#{{User|Ray Trace}} Article simply isn't ready yet. Compare it to [[Banzai Bill]], and much more information can be used for its sections, such as level specific appearances and perhaps can use a game-by-game evolution of its appearances in a section for general information. I could do a more specific breakdown if you like but as of now, I don't support.
#{{User|Swallow}} Per Ray Trace.
#{{User|Hewer}} Per all.

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==== Comments ====
You need to at least say why you think the article should be featured. {{User:Swallow/sig}} 11:47, October 20, 2021 (EDT)

How? Where? —-[[File: Doopliss.png|30px]] [[User: OhoJeeOnFire|OhoJeeOnFire]] ([[User talk:OhoJeeOnFire|talk]]) 11:49, October 20, 2021 (EDT)

Never mind. —-[[File: Doopliss.png|30px]] [[User: OhoJeeOnFire|OhoJeeOnFire]] ([[User talk:OhoJeeOnFire|talk]]) 11:51, October 20, 2021 (EDT)

Here's my issues with the article, using [[Banzai Bill]] as a point of reference:
*Article lacks a sound cue for when a Bill gets shot out of a cannon. This is an extremely important cue for this enemy, as it often gets fired from off-screen.
*''Super Mario Bros.'': Where exactly does it appear in World 5-1? And what other levels does it have subsequent appearances in? What levels where it's fired from a cannon, and fired off-screen?
*No mention of ''[[Super Mario All-Stars]]'' when that warrants a section header.
*No mention of ''[[Super Mario Bros. Special]]'', except in appearances and nav template.
*''Super Mario Bros.: The Lost Levels'': What levels does the Bullet Bill appear in? Also needs a reference to [[All Night Nippon Super Mario Bros.]]
*''Super Mario Bros. 3'': Needs level specific appearances, also detailing where it appears in the level.
*''Super Mario World'': This is what the sections in this article should look like, where it details their appearances level-by-level, especially for some that appear in some special rooms and whatnot.
*''Super Mario Land 2: 6 Golden Coins'': Needs level specific appearances, also detailing where it appears in the level.
*''Super Mario 64'': It's mostly complete but it doesn't mention how they eventually disappear if shot out for too long. Could use a comparison pic for it and the remake.
*''Super Mario Sunshine'': Needs level specific appearances, also detailing where it appears in the level.
*''New Super Mario Bros.'': Their level specific appearances could be further detailed.
*''Super Mario Galaxy'': Needs level specific appearances, also detailing where it appears in the level.
*''New Super Mario Bros. Wii'': Level appearances can use expansion.
*''Super Mario Galaxy 2'': Needs level specific appearances, also detailing where it appears in the level.
*''Super Mario 3D Land'': Needs level specific appearances, also detailing where it appears in the level.
*''New Super Mario Bros. 2'': Needs level specific appearances, also detailing where it appears in the level.
*''New Super Mario Bros. U'': Needs level specific appearances, also detailing where it appears in the level.
*''Super Mario 3D World'': Needs level specific appearances, also detailing where it appears in the level.
(you get the general idea of the platformer appearances)
*''Paper Mario'': Needs images.
*''Game & Watch Gallery'': Linked section headers are not allowed, so those need to be edited out.
*''Mario Party'': Needs images
*''Super Princess Peach'': Section badly needs a rewrite, has remnants of old wiki writing.
*Article has repetitive "this appears again, once again, reappears" when it should be written to be less repetitive. Bullet Bills are a series staple, it's known they'll make a lot of appearances.
*Bullet Bills appear in Roy Koopa's move in Dr. Mario World.

This isn't all of it, I kinda fell after I was done with the platformer sections so...yeah now you get why I have issues with this nomination. {{User:Ray Trace/sig}} 22:09, October 21, 2021 (EDT)
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 #{{User|Bubbasour11}} It has links to most of the sub-species.
 #{{User|CBFan5}} Overall, this article is pretty good.  It has few contractions, and its format is great.  Therefore, it should be featured.
-#{{User|FanOfYoshi}} Per all
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 #{{User|Swallow}} Per Ray Trace.
 #{{User|Hewer}} Per all.
-#{{User|BananaBarrels}} In my opinion, the article is a bit too long to be featured. Featured Articles should be of a decent length, but newcomers should be able to read an article short enough that they can get a basic idea of this wiki.
-#{{User|Waluigi Time}} Per Ray Trace.
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-'''BananaBarrels'''
-#{{User|OhoJeeOnFire}} Read Ray Trace’s comment.
-#{{User|Archivist Toadette}} When it comes to size, long featured articles trump short ones.
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 This isn't all of it, I kinda fell after I was done with the platformer sections so...yeah now you get why I have issues with this nomination. {{User:Ray Trace/sig}} 22:09, October 21, 2021 (EDT)
-@Banana Barrels: That's not the point of featured articles. The point is to showcase the best articles on the wiki, not necessarily to introduce people new to it. {{User:Ray Trace/sig}} 04:12, November 5, 2021 (EDT)