Editing MarioWiki:Featured articles/N1/Ashley and Red

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|nominated=21:10 (PST), 17 February, 2014
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==== Support ====
#{{User|Ashley and Red}}My artcile (and of Red) looks good. I didn't see any issues.
#{{User|Lord Grammaticus}}

==== Oppose ====
#{{User|Yoshi876}} Per Glowsquid in the comments.
#{{User|Pinkie Pie}} Per Yoshi876. Featured Articles <u>'''MUST'''</u> be at 9000 bytes to be featured. This article is at 8444 bytes. Please expand this, or else this won't be featured <u>'''AT ALL'''</u>.
#{{User|Glowsquid}} see comments.

==== Removal of Opposes ====
'''Pinkie Pie, Yoshi876 and Golwsquid'''
#{{User|Ashley and Red}}I did the requirements of you 3. And Glowsquid, the beggining of the article looks good in now and i fixed the Touched and Game & Wario issues. :)

==== Comments ====

I am OK with your opposes....But, exceot the size, the article looks good to you all?{{User|Ashley and Red}}

The article has several obvious problems; 
*<s>The introduction is a single clunky block of text. While most of the information is relevant, stuff like Ashley's age and "backstory" is not material that needs to be mentioned in the intro and could be spun off in their own section or integrated in the rest of the article.</s> Chopped it down to a size I think is decent.
*The WW Touched section is extremely short, lacking several details about the stage's "storyline".
*The G&W section barely describes the Ashley minigame.
*Hokey writing in spots ("Red clearly survives whatever perils Ashley puts him under," lol, what?).

You can probably push the article over the minimum recommended 9.000 bytes by expanding the lacking sections --[[User:Glowsquid|Glowsquid]] ([[User talk:Glowsquid|talk]]) 19:37, 17 February 2014 (EST)
::OK, I fixed these things except of:
*Beggining if the Article: Looks good in this way, and I don't kniw what put :P
*Game & Wario's section: I don't have Wii U, and never okayed the game.{{User|Ashley and Red}}
:::Anyone who played Game & Wario wanna help?{{User|Ashley and Red}}
::::What it looks now??{{User|Ashley and Red}}

Pinkie Pie, why are you so damn obsessed about much less bytes this article has under 9000? Even Glowsquid said its only the recommended amount. My god. If the article has about  8999 bytes, adding the FA template would actually make it exceed 9000 bytes. Do you understand how ridiculous it is translating this guideline to a rule???? {{User|Baby Luigi}}
::Thanks, Baby Luigi. You are the number one {{User|Ashley and Red}}
I've also remedied whatever grammar mistakes I could catch, so I may as well put my vote in. If it's not FA quality, I can help get it there. {{User|Lord Grammaticus}}