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===[[{{SUBPAGENAME}}]]===
===[[{{#titleparts:{{PAGENAME}}||3}}]]===
{{FA archive notice}}
{{FANOMSTAT
'''Ashley and Red''' became a featured article at 12:12, 28 February, 2014'''
|nominated=21:10 (PST), 17 February, 2014
|passed=<!--When it is 5-0, put the time (such as 12:10, 11 December 2012) of the fifth support/removal of last oppose by copying it from the history of the page.-->
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==== Support ====
==== Support ====
#{{User|Ashley and Red}}My artcile (and of Red) looks good. I didn't see any issues.
#{{User|Ashley and Red}}My artcile (and of Red) looks good. I didn't see any issues.
#{{User|Lord Grammaticus}}
#{{User|Baby Luigi}}
#{{User|Icemario}}
#{{User|Epic Rosalina}}
#{{User|Mario}}
#{{User|Daisyluva99}}


==== Oppose ====
==== Oppose ====
#{{User|Yoshi876}} Per Glowsquid in the comments.
#{{User|Pinkie Pie}} Per Yoshi876. Featured Articles <u>'''MUST'''</u> be at 9000 bytes to be featured. This article is at 8444 bytes. Please expand this, or else this won't be featured <u>'''AT ALL'''</u>.
#{{User|Demonic KB}} Per all.
#{{User|Glowsquid}} see comments.


==== Removal of Opposes ====
==== Removal of Opposes ====
'''Pinkie Pie, and Demonic KB'''
#{{User|Ashley and Red}}I did the requirements of you 3. And Glowsquid, the beggining of the article looks good in this way.


==== Comments ====
==== Comments ====
I am OK with your opposes....But, exceot the size, the article looks good to you all?{{User|Ashley and Red}}
I am OK with your opposes....But, exceot the size, the article looks good to you all?{{User|Ashley and Red}}


The article has several obvious problems;  
The article has several obvious problems;  
*<s>The introduction is a single clunky block of text. While most of the information is relevant, stuff like Ashley's age and "backstory" is not material that needs to be mentioned in the intro and could be spun off in their own section or integrated in the rest of the article.</s> Chopped it down to a size I think is decent.
*The introduction is a single clunky block of text. While most of the information is relevant, stuff like Ashley's age and "backstory" is not material that needs to be mentioned in the intro and could be spun off in their own section or integrated in the rest of the article.
*The WW Touched section is extremely short, lacking several details about the stage's "storyline".
*The WW Touched section is extremely short, lacking several details about the stage's "storyline".
*The G&W section barely describes the Ashley minigame.
*The G&W section barely describes the Ashley minigame.
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:::Anyone who played Game & Wario wanna help?{{User|Ashley and Red}}
:::Anyone who played Game & Wario wanna help?{{User|Ashley and Red}}
::::What it looks now??{{User|Ashley and Red}}
::::What it looks now??{{User|Ashley and Red}}
Pinkie Pie, why are you so damn obsessed about much less bytes this article has under 9000? Even Glowsquid said its only the recommended amount. My god. If the article has about  8999 bytes, adding the FA template would actually make it exceed 9000 bytes. Do you understand how ridiculous it is translating this guideline to a rule???? {{User|Baby Luigi}}
::Thanks, Baby Luigi. You are the number one {{User|Ashley and Red}}
:::Baby Weegee, number not one. {{User|Baby Luigi}}
I've also remedied whatever grammar mistakes I could catch, so I may as well put my vote in. If it's not FA quality, I can help get it there. {{User|Lord Grammaticus}}
:I might have a look into this article some time. {{User|Baby Luigi}}
::That sounds good to me.Thank you two. And Baby Luigi isn't number one, I am <nowiki>#1</nowiki> {{User|Ashley and Red}}
:::Uh...Glowquid...what is wrong?{{User|Ashley and Red}}
There's some stuff I want to touch up in the personality and G&W sections, but nothing particularly galling. I'll remove my oppose. --[[User:Glowsquid|Glowsquid]] ([[User talk:Glowsquid|talk]]) 13:57, 19 February 2014 (EST)
:::Woohooo Thanks!!!{{User|Ashley and Red}}

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