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==Plot synopsis== | ==Plot synopsis== | ||
On a page of Fryguy's | On a page of Fryguy's half-eaten/burned yearbook are various pictures of his days in [[Fryguy High]], apparently a high school for Fryguys. | ||
The first image shows that Fryguy High had a baseball team that almost always won, as the balls they threw had a habit of melting the opposing team's baseball bats. | The first image shows that Fryguy High had a baseball team that almost always won, as the balls they threw had a habit of melting the opposing team's baseball bats. | ||
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The next snapshot shows that the students once went on a field trip to the "[[Kaboomka Fireworks Factory]]". Unfortunately, the trip ended in disaster when it became engulfed in flames and exploded. | The next snapshot shows that the students once went on a field trip to the "[[Kaboomka Fireworks Factory]]". Unfortunately, the trip ended in disaster when it became engulfed in flames and exploded. | ||
The next picture has several Fryguys sitting outside Fryguy High's principal's office. The caption says that a few "bad apples" were caught smoking in the | The next picture has several Fryguys sitting outside Fryguy High's principal's office. The caption says that a few "bad apples" were caught smoking in the washroom, though these "rule-breakers" claimed they couldn't help it. | ||
The final panel shows that Fryguy High, unsurprisingly, had burned down and was once planned for reconstruction, though this was canceled and the building was left as a smoldering pile of rubble. | The final panel shows that Fryguy High, unsurprisingly, had burned down and was once planned for reconstruction, though this was canceled and the building was left as a smoldering pile of rubble. | ||
Alongside this final image is a note from the school's librarian, Miss Perkins, claiming that Mongo Fryguy still owes the school 52,000 books, which he presumably ate/burned. | Alongside this final image is a note from the school's librarian, Miss Perkins, claiming that Mongo <!--Is that spelling correct? Cursive's hard to read--> Fryguy still owes the school 52,000 books, which he presumably ate/burned. | ||
==Errors== | ==Errors== | ||
*The upper-left caption redundantly refers to the Briquettes as Fryguy High's "base-baseball team", repeating "base" as a result of the word wrapping around to the left of the page. | *The upper-left caption redundantly refers to the Briquettes as Fryguy High's "base-baseball team", repeating "base" as a result of the word wrapping around to the left of the page. | ||
*[[Lemmy|Lemmy Koopa]] lacks a visible nose in the upper-right image. | *[[Lemmy|Lemmy Koopa]] lacks a visible nose in the upper-right image. | ||
*In the upper-right caption, the second "ha" in "Ha, Ha!!!" is unnecessarily capitalized. The "neither" in the middle caption's "...and Neither will they!!!" is similarly unnecessarily capitalized | *In the upper-right caption, the second "ha" in "Ha, Ha!!!" is unnecessarily capitalized. | ||
*The caption of the bottom-left image makes a grammatical error by saying that "A few bad apples ''is'' ruining it for the whole school..." Since the subject of the sentence is multiple Fryguys, | *The "neither" in the middle caption's "...and Neither will they!!!" is similarly unnecessarily capitalized. | ||
*Due to it being phrased as a question, the first sentence in the bottom-right caption should end with a question mark | *The caption of the bottom-left image makes a grammatical error by saying that "A few bad apples ''is'' ruining it for the whole school..." Since the subject of the sentence is multiple Fryguys, rather than one, the correct grammar would be "A few bad apples ''are'' ruining it..." | ||
*Due to it being phrased as a question, the first sentence in the bottom-right caption should end with a question mark, rather than the exclamation points used. Additionally, the "alma" in "{{wp|Alma mater}}" and "me" in "Not Me!!!!!!" are unnecessarily capitalized. | |||
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